Zoom in on our writing throughout this unit...
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Natalie Duff
10/29/2015 08:41:14 am
What stand out to me was waiting ending
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Avaneeth
10/29/2015 08:46:32 am
Why❓
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Avaneeth
10/29/2015 08:42:42 am
I zoomed in and the thing that made me a better writer was revising because when I revised, I learnt hpw to put stronger and more expressive words.
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Emily
10/29/2015 08:45:43 am
the ending made me a better writer because I didn't know how to do ending so it helped me.
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Vince
10/29/2015 08:48:11 am
Revising and editing made me a better writer because if I did not check my my writing I would of made alot of mistakes.
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Natalie Novak
10/29/2015 08:48:12 am
ᑌᔕIᑎG TᕼE ᘔOOᗰ Iᑎ ᔕTᖇᗩTEGY.
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Arin
10/29/2015 08:48:35 am
editing and revising because I always have forgotten to do the punctuation like the the excamation mark and I would have a lot of mistakes
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Rohit
10/29/2015 08:48:47 am
Small moments and editing because first when we write we in a book then we do editing and in editing by that time we have to do rivizing and by that time we have to finish all the lines and then we have to do editing and by that time we will be ready and than it was easy and I liked doing editing.
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Mahdi
10/29/2015 08:49:11 am
An idea to make me a stronger writer by trying to stretch out a word and sound it out
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Anjali
10/29/2015 08:49:47 am
it helped me write better endings
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Anjali
10/29/2015 08:54:42 am
How long can a book go?
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Nicholas
10/29/2015 08:51:24 am
C. Ms.Donovan's video
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Braden
10/29/2015 08:52:56 am
What you doing video and narrated with external story, and then added internal story. Then we did it on are personal narratives !
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Om
10/29/2015 08:53:05 am
So I think that endings made me really good because what I wrote my part my story was really good I just do little bit fixes , and I wonder what are the writing strategies and when are they used ?
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Sanjay
10/29/2015 08:53:40 am
Revising and editing helped because I could make sure that my story spellings and stuff for correct.
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Akshaya
10/29/2015 08:54:19 am
I liked internal/external because it made me think more deeper into writing .
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Reyan
10/29/2015 08:54:33 am
We learned the difference between revising and editing using green and red pens. And we watched a video about the narrative would internal story, then we wrote it on our personal narrative!!!
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Braden
10/29/2015 08:55:11 am
This stood out to me because usually watching videos help me read but only I'm goin this stood out to me because usually watching videos with underlined words that help me spell
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Saatvik
10/29/2015 08:55:53 am
When we zoomed in our writing we did Rivising and Editedting. Editing and rivising helped me for my writing to be better.It helped me so I won't make any mistakes.How do you make your writing famous.
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Om
10/29/2015 08:56:17 am
So my wondering is that if we edit a lot when will we finish publishing?
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Arnav
10/29/2015 08:56:27 am
Leads beacuse it made me learn about action and sound effects and I wonder if you could add 2 leads in one story
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Joshua
10/29/2015 08:58:52 am
I don't nderstand
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Braden
10/29/2015 08:57:29 am
My claim is that because watching videos is what helps knows people either video or because of the underlined words
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Aayushi
10/29/2015 08:58:11 am
Claim: personal narratives helped me focuses on one topic. Support: I chose personal narratives because your focusing on one topic all the time. Question: Can personal narratives be about your self.
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ᗷᕼᗩᐯYᗩ
10/29/2015 08:59:16 am
I ᒪIKEᗪ TᕼE IᑎTEᖇᑎᗩᒪ/E᙭TEᖇᑎᗩᒪ ᗷEᑕᗩᑌᔕE ᗯE ᒪEᗩᖇᑎEᗪ ᕼOᗯ TO ᗩᗪᗪ TᕼOᑌGᕼT ᗩᑎᗪ ᑭᒪᑌᔕ I ᗪIᗪ ᑎOT ᗩᗪᗪ ᗰᑌᑕᕼ ᗷEᖴOᖇE.
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Joshua
10/29/2015 09:01:33 am
I wonder if you could use 3 or 4 leads in one story
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Olivia
10/29/2015 09:03:45 am
We did editing and revising to make our stories perfect.
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Mahdi
10/29/2015 09:04:19 am
Sketch pictures:how sketch pictures helped me become a stronger writer is that they help me with the writing to write More words and to have a better story
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Adhitya
10/29/2015 09:05:58 am
Zoom in it help me to writing ending and I support it because it really helps.
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Jessica
10/29/2015 09:07:35 am
When I zoom into writing the one thing that stands out to me is starting in the beginning of writing when we're thinking about what personal narratives should we write and we used a picture of our house and neighborhood and jotted down some places and all the details. My claim on writing in a specific part is I think that writing the verbs because we got to put them in our writing and make some boring words more exciting to read my support is that to be a stronger writer is that when we write our endings it made our writing stronger because it closed the last part with a smooth transition to finish. My wonder is that is there another part of writing personal narratives when professional people do it?
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JoAnn
10/29/2015 09:09:19 am
My claim is that I used the ending day to really get to see that I can be a really good descriptive writer and I am still wondering what else I can do really well that I have not realized yet.
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